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John Hall was indeed the producer of Takin' My Time, but he is not the NY politician that the link goes to. Takeenan (talk) 00:56, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Of course he IS the musician and politician John Hall, just read the section Musical career! Thomas279 (talk) 08:00, 7 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"hired to produce the album, but was replaced" → "hired to handle the production, but was ultimately replaced"
"from critics, and reached number eight-seven on the" → "from music critics, while it reached number 87 on the US"
"has also been positive, as critics liked" → "have also been positive, with critics praising"
"believes Takin' My Time was Raitt's" → "believed the album was Raitt's"
"until her comeback" → "up to her comeback" to avoid repetitive wording
Mention the accompanying tour in the last sentence of the lead, though just state "accompanying tour" without "for the album" since accompanying makes it obvious
On hold, even though this article is short, I did notice that you have some reasonably good writing skills! --K. Peake 08:42, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Kyle Peake: Alright, I believe I have addressed your concerns, and thank you for the review!. Regarding the lack of information about...well everything related to this album, I don't think there is any more information out there. This isn't one of Raitt's bigger albums, and I think I've exhausted all the information I could find. Regarding the possibility of more promotional stuff, I don't think there is any more. Raitt was a touring machine back in the 1970s, and for the longest time that was the only way she was able to promote her music. She wouldn't even release a single until 7 years after she entered the music business. Famous Hobo (talk) 21:40, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Famous Hobo: There were a few changes you missed but they were only minor, so I did some brief copy editing and made the required fixes to ✓Pass this! --K. Peake 05:32, 9 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
On hold, even though this article is short, I did notice that you have some reasonably good writing skills! --K. Peake 08:42, 6 October 2020 (UTC)