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German cruiser Blücher

Came over this page as I was reading about the german invation of Norway in 1940. Rather disapointed at lack of content and a couple of factuall errors, I spendt some time expanding and - in my eyes - making it better. Now, if someone could look over it with some fresh eyes and fix all the things I'm sure I forgotten, I'll be very gratefull. I'll see if I can get time to work more on it myself as well. WegianWarrior 12:13, 16 Dec 2004 (UTC)

• I've done a copyedit and wikification. Someone else will have to check the facts. -- ALoan (Talk) 12:56, 16 Dec 2004 (UTC)
• I'll try to help out as well. Being a Norwegian, the subject matter is quite relevant to me in the first place* (+ I'm a WWII history 'nut'...). (* but note, of course, that I'm always striving to keep articles NPOV regardless of any personal relevance) --Wernher 15:05, 16 Dec 2004 (UTC)
• OK, I've put in some initial effort. More to follow; the book by Binder & Schlünz is a superb reference. (A pity it's not translated into English. Hmm, an opportunity to earn a little money from my writing, perhaps, contrary to my present wikipediholism...) --Wernher 18:01, 16 Dec 2004 (UTC)