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Music of Nigeria[edit]

I'd like to nominate it for WP:FAC soon, but decided to put it here first. I've just spent two hours moving bits around and swapping sections and whatnot, but I'm not sure the result reads any clearer than it did before. I'd like some readers' opinions. Are there any questions unanswered? Can you follow the complex interweaving of juju, fuji, highlife, Yo-pop and other styles? Does it give an adequate overview of traditional music? Tuf-Kat 02:05, Dec 8, 2004 (UTC)

Wow! Detailed and fascinating :-) I can see a lot of hard work has been put into it. However, I have some suggestions:

  1. In the lead section it says: "pan-West African development of highlife and palm-wine music" - what does "pan-West" mean?
  2. In "Hausa" you have the word "complexly". Is that a word? :P
  3. What are "Praise singers"? I'm not familiar with that term...

I can tell you are obviously an expert in this field, or at least a very enthusiastic amateur! I think you are almost ready to go to WP:FAC. - Ta bu shi da yu 15:10, 30 Dec 2004 (UTC)

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